The composition of the drawing is well thought out as you can clearly see the depth of the objects, there is some slight confusion to the left of the drawing with the two jugs as one seems to be near-kissing, this is confusing as you cannot tell which jug is infront of the other, this could be improved upon by adding shading to this area to show that the smaller jug is behind the bigger jug.
The main focal point of the image seems to be the large jug in the middle but because of the perspective at which it was drawn this happens to be almost exactly at the centre of the page, this is not following the rule of thirds and is not as pleasing to the viewer as it could be, to improve upon this image, it would need to be moved slightly to the left by adding more drapery to the right of the image.
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